The Invisible Town Called Invint

I have come up with an new idea for my next novel. Believe it or not, I got my idea from a video from youtube based on Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince. I wrote this story in 4th grade, but it was only a couple of pages. Now I am going to rewrite it into something much more. The title of it is going to be the same as the 1 I wrote in 4th grade: The Invisible Town Called Invint. There is going to be one character ( I have not decided on a name yet) that works in Invint for the evil ruler. He does not do it willingly. He is forced. One day he sneeks out of Invint and meets the second main character ( Shio or Shia) who is a spy that just got out of the hopital from a serious injury on his last adventure. Conor is asked to be a double agent, but Conor turns down the offer. He is bound to Invint and the ruler would know if he betrade him. Conor shows them his tatoo ( which is his mark of service to Invint). Shio goes undercover in Invint. Conor is asked to protect Shio while he is in Invint. While there, Conor is forcd to kill three enemies. Shio witnesses and keeps his distance from Conor. Shio is attacked by enemies and Conor saves his life. Fro m now on they meet secretly, plotting how to destroy Invint. Later on, they agree to kill the leader. Shio ges cursed, but both still go after leader. Shio once again is seriously injured, leaving Conor to fight the leader. He cannot defeat him himself. Shio uses up every once of strength left in him to help Conor defet the leader. The leader dies and Shio collaspes. The kingdom falls. Conor uses the life pack he stole from the leader on Shio. The king's servent's come in and take Conor away. He is sentenced to death. Shio gets thrown out of Invint since they think he is already dead. Once Shio recovers, he sneaks back into Invint to rescue Conor. Their friendship is tested as they escape. Shio finds out how to destroy Invint. They enter the forbidden tower as guards and kill the enemies. Then thye destroy Invint. Invint explodes. Conor and Shio wake up in the real world and go back to spy center. Conor becomes a spy and they begin to work together. They vowel to never, ever take on an invisible town again.

This is just my notes on how I'm going to write the story. I might change it as I get new ideas, but that's what I have for now. I probably will add some new things in there as I begin to write it. I am not going to begin to write it until I'm done with my final copyy of My Brother's Secret though.

What do you think of this prolouge?